Friday, February 5, 2010

How Decorate A Rabbit Rabbit Hole Comments?

Rabbit Hole comments? - how decorate a rabbit

"Rabbit Hole"

Listless idle
From his summer sun
Wilting forms
To turn on the wings.
Located in the heart you stole,
Through the Looking Glass.
What brings you to your work?
Do you have your last train too fast?
Future persistent in your dreams
Did you decorate Grail
With shouts Forgotten
Fragrant Magic
Wishing Well
Pathways untraveled,
Yesterday.
And the scent of flowers
Consolation
Or a fort of blankets,
Chairs and tables in the kitchen?
How to decorate your rabbit hole?

5 comments:

░▒▓ K@╥RîN@ ▓▒░ said...

Choosy
Enthusiastic
Passionate
Jealous
Obsessive
Worship
Keen
Passionate
Promotion
Annoying
Fervent
Unconditional
Sincere
Beautiful
Full of emotion
Nice
Touching
Submissive

The concepts are illustrated at least 2, the enthusiasm in this poem to communicate.

I estimate the uncertainty of the difference in this poem by heart!

This poem is 10/10

Expect to make it simpler :-))

Sincerely open
K @ TRIN @

DOI DOI said...

About relax and ignore the problems?
Why poetry is not good, as you never get any comments posted! Seriously, it is pissing me off, if the poems:

"Why do u wont listen
Can not you see in the hort! "

And what a lot of positive feedback! WTF?

In any case, I can ask you why you "are apathetic?

Mizzy said...

I like enforcing the rhymes
"untraveled ways" and rolls

Great Writing

bobby's girl said...

Read unique and very pleasant.

Sin said...

It is a question of the hut. Sureal very cool poem

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